His hands Strong and thick Wrapped around mine Soft touch Warm embrace The scent of him Overwhelms my head I feel drowsy Sinking Slowly Into his arms Once more At peace
I am a thirteen, almost fourteen, year old girl who is going to start High School next year. I have a passion for writing, and have decided to start this blog as a way of sharing my pieces with you, the readers. I love critique, so if you have some, post a comment! Hope you enjoy these as much as I enjoyed writing them for you.
now THIS is good, because it stays on a central topic and has motion, rhythm, flow, and imagery. :) me likey.
ReplyDeletethanks! *hugs Elsha*
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